Peer Notes on Holden Draft
I believe the thesis statement in the analysis is “the declaration of
independence is the foundation on which our nation was created, and without its
ideas who knows where we would be today.” I think you could find some way to
mention rhetorical appeals, and techniques in the thesis statement unless; the
following sentence was also part of the thesis. You explained the use of
rhetorical appeals in each paragraph which was a very effective way to explain.
I honestly feel you did not need a whole paragraph on logical appeals. Instead,
you could tell the audience what the appeals are within the three separate
paragraphs you already have. Overall, I could not find much more, and I enjoyed
reading it.
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